Very good poem. I could almost see everything. Keep up the good work. 5/5
I don't think that this poem needs any changes.

This is aq great peice, the plot is very well told. it is so clearly expressed nd holds the reader very well, anyone would think it was based upon first hand expiriance (untill you realise that the character dies). great peipce

5/5

I've never read the book so i cant say but the poem itself is done wonderfully, what i have read is alot of your poetry and to answer your bullitun id have to say your writing hasnt changed since youve started, youve been great all along

Wow this is an amazing poem, it's so deep and everyword leaves u wanting more, excellent meaning/flow a true masterpiece 5/5

Wow. That was amazing. You pinned the emotions from the book down so well. Also, I have never seen someone base a poem on a book. Fantastic. 5/5! Keep it up.

Stephanie

Wow. That was amazing. You pinned the emotions from the book down so well. Also, I have never seen someone base a poem on a book. Fantastic. 5/5! Keep it up.

Stephanie

Wow, that is really disturbing, but i loved it!! it's haunting and foreboding, absolutely brilliant! wonderful job 5/5

This is disturbing, and sad, but it`s ah`mazing . Yu did an absolutely BEAUTiFUL job . Wow . The way you wrote it, it sounded like it actually happened to you, but then I saw the whole ... chopping part and that you based it on a book . Just ah`mazing job . Wow .
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Hey, great poem! What kind of Sick pathetic son of a biach could do that? Its sick!
Well done on your poem! Excellent job on the Rhyming especially! Ive never read the book, but i hope its not true!
Love Mel

This is also a good one ... and well worded at that ... i love how you read a book understood it ... or maybe didn't understand it and through the sum of it into your own words ... good job