Great poem. Excellent rhyming. I like the story to it, very sad. Keep it up!

Awww.....
This is such a good poem..

i feel the same way sometimes..

Thanx for commenting mine ;)

[[ Samminess ]]

"Sorrow and despair took place of the love
That my own inexperience had built"

i love that! this is such a great poem!

XX

This poem is awesome!!!
I can kinda relate to it..
It happened to me a few years ago!!! =(
But its a really gr8 poem, well expressed and beautifully written!!! =)
Keep up the good work!!!
5/5

!Angel!

I can relate..such a great poem..very sad..and the words were so emotional..once again..beautifully well written..
*thx 4 the comment*
-sarah

I can relate..such a great poem..very sad..and the words were so emotional..once again..beautifully well written..
*thx 4 the comment*
-sarah

Wow I loved this poem...it had so much emotion in it. That happens to so many of us it sucks