Great use of words in this poem. very well written. keep em coming xx

From a young woman's view point, this sounds absolutely perfect. You certainly know what you're talking about. Great write!

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

Wow, what a poem! You always amaze your readers with the charm of your writes. Keep it up.

Sorry for the late comment, its just that I've been out of touch with the site for a while.

Best Wishes
Michelle

Great poem, Choice of words shows how intellectual you are. The only criticism i'd have is the flow just doesn't fit. Needs to run a little smoother. But other then that. Beautiful write.. Please read one of my poems if you have the time.
Seth