Wow. This was really great. I love the effect your words have on me. They just left me in awe. Your vocabulary was great and the form you used really made this poem great. The descriptions, imagery, flow, and everything else was great. Nice job 5/5

Good. Good good good. It rhymed, it flowed, and you used some words which were very....thoughtful, for lack of a better phrase.
Format suits you well, and I advise you to keep writing such graceful poems.

Very good poem. Very vivid imagery. I admire the format....good job!

O. i like theimage this poem creates. nice depth.

Nice job on this form. Good imagery!

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You did so good with this...the imagry was just great and I really enjoyed reading it! :) Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

Very mysterious yet beautifully written. Superb Job.~Tina 5/5.

Well writen, your refrain was exelent, brought me back to the poem when it began to shake a little.

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwww.
i love this poem.
its just so well written!!!
beautiful.
5/5

Excellent form. I like your word choice and the imagery. Beautiful dark poem!