"And night comes with its dark magic
I wander like a discontent soul"

Lovely words..
The whole poem had a great flow and beautiful images.
Fabulous write, 5/5 for sure.
*Gem*

Well written! i can feel ur feelings here :0)

Ooh.. mysterious. i like it. very much. there's nothing quite as exciting [and often risky] as kissing someone new. a lot of times, though, it's a risk worth taking.

Lovely selection of words, great write indeed

all the best and take care

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

And night comes with its dark magic
I wander like a discontent soul
Do you think it's destruction & tragic
But love should take its toll

I like this stanza lot. Very beautiful but sad write.

Very sad poem of love. The imagery you have stired with your words is great.

And night comes with its dark magic
I wander like a discontent soul
Do you think it's destruction & tragic
But love should take its toll

This stanza is excellent. Great word choices.
Take Care Cindy

This is really good! I loved the lines
-But love taught a hard lesson
Transition of laugh to scream-
I think that is an amazing visual. You did a great job with this. Keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun
Btw-Thanks for the comment on my work! :)

Superb with an awsome flow. u deserve 5/5