by Bethan Dec 5, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
We mindlessly scurry and scuttle, |
by Rachel RTVW
I really like this one. I think people get to caught up in everyday life that sometimes they let the most important things pass them by. Another well done poem from you! |
by *Charisma*
Pretty well done in my opinion. Nice to take a break from reality. I'm about to do that! heehee Nice job, Bethan! |
by Brett
This is just another one of your excellent poems. It is so true that we all are guilty of falling into the daily grind. I agree that we need to change things up before life passes us by. |
Rather thought provoking. A very good piece, as usual. My favorite line was 'Isn't this career thing great?'. Another well written poem in every aspect. |