Rather thought provoking. A very good piece, as usual. My favorite line was 'Isn't this career thing great?'. Another well written poem in every aspect.

Brad xx

This is just another one of your excellent poems. It is so true that we all are guilty of falling into the daily grind. I agree that we need to change things up before life passes us by.

Pretty well done in my opinion. Nice to take a break from reality. I'm about to do that! heehee Nice job, Bethan!
Charisma*

I really like this one. I think people get to caught up in everyday life that sometimes they let the most important things pass them by. Another well done poem from you!