by LuvLyLynn Dec 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
As two lovebirds start breaking apart, |
Excellent! the flow is really good but i would have evened out the stanzas |
by Calli
Good poem. i like it alot. |
That's definitely an awesome poem. It's nice to get two sides of a story. |
by Goran Rahim
This is a great poem, very well written. the only thing you can do is break the lines better, |
by silence
Wow. very true and very moving i guess you could say. 5/5 |