I really like this one as well. I like the style of writing. I only wish I could write like that. Keep writing :)

"And as you walk out, my soul has left me. (You were my other half that made me whole and without you I feel incomplete...)"

A very powerful ending, it really gets the point across how you feel at the end.
I agree with Silence. This style is excellent, i haven't seen one like this before.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

I really liked this. You definitely portrayed your emotions very well in this and I think that your thoughts that you put in parentheses gave the poem a very nice and sad effect. Great job on this! 5/5
And thank you for your comment on my poem :)

I LOVE IT!!!!! You are soooooo good! And I'm NOT just saying that! I love love love your poems!
Thank you so much for your comment on my poem it means so much to me!
Burning~Wings

Really good way to explain a break up or seperation
amazing job! i loved it!!