by scars and stories Dec 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Our teachers always told us |
by just a poet
This is a really good poem. it flowed really well. if you wanted to make iteven better you could even out the sylabols in each line a little more but thats only if your a perfectnist. its really good both from a poetc sense and a romantic one. even better it has a moving story to it. i was wondering weather its based on reality? |
by fatima
Your poems was well and truley amazing WOW.........please do read and comment on some of poems thankyou......... x x x tc |
by Lisa
Wow amazing poem |
That poem was beutiful, sad in a good way. |
Ohmigosh! this is reallly pretty!! i loved it. 5/5 |