Wow. This was amazing.
Something that a lot of girls out there can relate to. I know I can, I'm a cutter so I can relate to that one part in there.
The flow was excellent and your choice of wording was wonderful.
Great job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Wow! Amazing poem!!! Your rhyming and metre was perfect.! You are so talented! Keep it up!
love Mel

Whoa. It's really.. dark. I like it. Your rhyming is amazing! and your vocab choice was great. I like your first stanza the best. It just pulled me right in. You really did a great job on this one.

Excellent.

5/5

Wow...that speaks the truth. I like that way that you are putting the world's problems out like that and making sure that people are aware of them. Keep up the good work....I'll comment the other five when I get home from school. *5/5*

Alyson

Wow. I really liked how you numbered all of the girls. this is a wonderfully written poem and it does give you an insight of what girls are doing nowadays. 5/5 wonderful.

This is a very good poem dacey, great flow, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

OMG! incredible poem! It just, flows like, incredibly well... it kept me reading...
YOu are a great writer! I love this poem. it is, odd, dark, but incredibly easy to relate to and it's kind of like a nursery rhyme....
great poem!

10.5
~Stevie

Wow, usually I am not one that likes dark poems, but you defentlly hit the spot with this poem. Very well written, the flow was outstanding, and the Structure was great. Keep up the fantastic work.

Peace, Joe

WOW.
This was brilliant.
I loved this, it is one of my favourite's on this site.
I think you did a wonderful job on this one.

Wow are you seriously only 13?? how can you write like that at 13!?! wonderful job again i loved it so much... 5/5

Another great poem! You are great at writing...keep it up...5/5