Another well written poem
i think you should space the words apart so people could see it better... or space the first letter from the rest of the word. great poem. i no how it is.

I think this should be a 5!!! this is a very good poem ciao, i loved the choice of words, miss yall at the club, but ill be back soon.

Very nice :]
Gave a 5.

Keep it up and such.

Take care,
N-G-C-S.

Another nicely written poem hun.. very well done 5/5 xx