Ok. this isnt a bad poem. but it did lack flow. it was slightly choppy with the line breaks. i also think you tried to make it unform with the 4 line stanzas but its a freeverse- it does not have to have specific lines and stanzas.
i also thin kit was a little repetitive.

but good job. it is such a true topic to write about and very relatable.

x3 Lauren

I liked the poem, i know alot of depressed people and it was a perfect reflection.

Will they lend me there hand,

there = their
The flow was kind of rocky, but the poem was nicely written . Many can relate to this -- So I think you wrote it well . Overall, emotional and nicely penned .
..__MiNDYY

This one was awsome. I loved the way that it flowed and it spoke to the soul. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Another beautiful heartfelt poem, lots of emotion. beautiful write, you are a wonderful writer. your poems flow so well, 5/5

I liked this.
I thought the flow was off in some places, but apart from that, it really touched me.

Wow. that was amazing. u have good writing skills. 5/5

Awww why so sad all the time??? ur kinda like my girlfriend in a way...

Merry x-mas and a happy new year to you