This is another very good poem jenna, it is beautifully written, i give it a 5/5!!!

Jenna, I couldn't do this style of poetry, but you seem to write it beautifully. I should really try this one day!!

Ciao xx

Oh dear jenna. this was another wonderful poem of yours.. it flown beautifuly. i sorta felt my heart skip a few beats when i was reading it..

ps- you still havnt told me who -HIM- is.

-T2

Hey Jenna, you're really such a great writer.. and i admire your vast knowledge 'bout poetry.. continue to touch our hearts with your poems.. :-)

Wow...
I hate starting a comment with wow, lol. But that is the first word that came to mind when i read through this poem.
I had to read it through twice to try and find anything that could use some work on it but to no avail.
I don't have much experience on this kind of poem but from reading this, it seems an interesting style that is easy to read.
You chose some interesting words in this which in turn created some beautiful images for me..
A fabulous write
*Gem*

Wow....that type of poemis confusing. yet you seem to understand well, because you pulled it off great! i loved the detailing and what not. 5/5

Ooh i wanna write something like that now =)

You are very inspiring haha...

LOL!! You are young and inspiring =D

5/5

Omg i love all your peotry, and your quotes as well. You write all your poems so beautifully. Excellent work, write more,
xox