She Says

by Raychil   Dec 5, 2006


My heart aches
My eyes burn
It seems the tables
Have taken their turn

I was feeling better
Like a new start
But of course she killed it
And tore me apart

She says I am weak
That her life is harder
I'm being stupid
I'm just a bad daughter

She says I am faking
Though I've felt this forever
And now I am done
Trying to tell her

Dad understood me
He always cares
But of course mother's different
I'm just a burden she bares

She says I am lying
Says I am just faking
But in her harsh words
More of my strength she's been taking

In this time, I've come to think
Maye it's not me,who needs the shrink.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dave

    Hey you. this really hit me because i am kinda dealing with the same thing. for me its my dad.

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Raychil, this is soo sad! It doesn't seem fair that someone so nice should be treated this way..soo if this is about you, I'm very sorry...you don't deserve it! Anyways, great poem and the flow and rhyming were flawless!
    xoxo