Memories Unspoken (Terzanelle)

by Italian Stallion   Dec 5, 2006


In the Mist of the night
As I sit alone
Looking upon the stars

And calling you my own
Longing for you
As I sit alone

I enjoy the view
And write a note
Longing for you

But this I will promote
As I sit and enjoy the ocean's breeze
And write a note

With such ease
I see your face
As I sit and enjoy the ocean's breeze

My heart will beat that much faster
In the Mist of the night
Looking upon the stars
Just knowing this was all a big disaster

© Copyright December 2, 2006 By: Italian Stallion

~Written for a club to club contest~

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A Terzanelle is a 19 line poem consisting of five interlocking triplets plus a concluding quatrain in which the first and third lines of the triplet appear as refrains. The middle line of each triplet is a repetent reappearing as the last line of the succeeding triplet with the exception of the next-to-last stanza which appears in the quatrain. Rhyme scheme - ABC BDB DED EFE FGF HACH.
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  • 17 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Wow I really liked this. First of it's type that I have read... I like it :). I might give it a go one day. Good write!

    Tux

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is a very good poem joe, looks like a hard style to learn, but you did great, keep it up!!!