Very powerful... i'm pretty much speechless on what to say..
You have a great piece of work here, full of emotion.
Keep writing
5/5
*Gem*

Ow...oh that was such a sad poem, showing this boys pain both emotionally and physically, i loved it. Btw, i found you by just skimming for names, because Layla is my name too:) check out some of my poem sometime.