Sweet Intoxication

by x.Athame.x   Dec 6, 2006


Blue eyes are watching
Loves notions taking hold
Locks of hair; hiding face
Oh dear; Heart will race

Sweet intoxication within
Drowning in emotions
Insides a passionate fire
Overflowing, burning desire

World spinning out of control
Heart running wildly ahead
Oh so gentle laughter
Heart now beating faster

Heat growing, burning up
Love, love, blows the mind
Around life love will dance
Oh only, only, give a chance

(C) Athamae

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  • 17 years ago

    by supratim

    U r only 13... and your poem is embellished with such feelings!!!!
    u r endowed with inexhaustible fund of romanticism..!!!!

    god bless

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    This was great! loved. it vry well written. keep it up. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Sweet intoxication within
    Drowning in emotions
    Insides a passionate fire
    Overflowing, burning desire"

    You doing brilliantly!
    You use such beautiful words such as in the stanza above to get the point across and you always have such depth to the simplest lines..
    Excellent
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    Athamae...i have to say,

    Blue eyes are watching
    Loves notions taking hold
    Locks of hair; hiding face
    Oh dear; Heart will race

    u know, he has blue eyes, and curly brown hair...

    ~amore~

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