Why Me

by shela   Dec 6, 2006


Tears flowing
Endless sorrow
Every single tear
Its own story
Joining stream of ocean
Fusion of pieces
From here and there
But all in one same?

Destiny of unfortune
Walking in darkness
Searching for a minute of peace
where my tears won't chase me

Why me?

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  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    Your poem showed true emotion in it and i really enjoyed reading this...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, that was good sweetie. I liekd your vocabulary and it flowed well. Nice ideas and emotion put into it too. Keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short, but very advanced freestyle. Great job and keep on writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    I thought it was a good poem. To me the flow seemed kind of off in a couple places (middle mostly), but other then that it was really good.
    I liked it a lot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. Keep up the good work.5/5

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