by shela Dec 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Tears flowing |
by ashley
Your poem showed true emotion in it and i really enjoyed reading this... |
by Jessica
Awh, that was good sweetie. I liekd your vocabulary and it flowed well. Nice ideas and emotion put into it too. Keep it up 5/5 |
by LadyPearl
Short, but very advanced freestyle. Great job and keep on writing! |
by Heather
I thought it was a good poem. To me the flow seemed kind of off in a couple places (middle mostly), but other then that it was really good. |
by Brittany C
Great poem. Keep up the good work.5/5 |