Great poem. Keep up the good work.5/5

I thought it was a good poem. To me the flow seemed kind of off in a couple places (middle mostly), but other then that it was really good.
I liked it a lot.

Short, but very advanced freestyle. Great job and keep on writing!

Awh, that was good sweetie. I liekd your vocabulary and it flowed well. Nice ideas and emotion put into it too. Keep it up 5/5

Your poem showed true emotion in it and i really enjoyed reading this...