Wow!!! awsumee poem i really lovee ittt keep er upp

We all have the fear of losing the things that mean the most ot us excellent job 5/5

I have the same feeeling i love this one ur now getting favorited

Terror strikes me everyday
Hoping love will make you stay

How true is that sentiment. Sometimes it is all we can do just hold hold on to the hope and face the fears.

You have truelly captured the essense of the fear that consumes all of us at one time or another.

Form wise, It was written with the depth of understanding and made for an easy read with the flow of the words.

Keep writing
Jeannie

Awww so sweet 5/5

Again amazing poem... totally putting you in my favs... i absolutely love your writing, wonderful job! nothing more to say about this poem, it really was good. b/c you have that talent, i'd suggest using more advanced vocabulary, which you do at times i know that, it's not elementary anymore. just try it, i think you could really pull it off. 5/5