Sounds like a fairytale.... :o)
You both are really very lucky as love doesnt comes so easily to everyone...well stay united forever... :o)

all the best and take care

This was a great poem Gemma! I love you've got a new one almost everyday, (like me lol) The coin metaphor was good. The only suggestion I have is to change this line

A relationship full
Of tender loving care

not because it doesn't rhyme...just because it's kinda cliche. But I guess we all use those. I'm just trying to do better comments, really trying to help others with their poetry, and vice versa. So bye!
Charisma*

"I knew I was in love
I knew that for a fact
And the best thing is
I knew you loved me back"

I know how that is... And its the best feeling to know someone loves you as much, or even more, as you love them. Great job 5/5

Sincerely,
Katlyn

I really appreciate the sweet, Loving, grateful tone of this well-written poem...

Aww that was such a sweet poem =]
5/5
~*~Jen~*~

+.+ I loved the last two lines "and the best thing is, i knew you loved me back " that is so sweet, it just makes the poem perfect. +.+

Aww.....how lovely
keep up the good work....

That was beautifully written hun. very touching piece. great job on this one. keep em coming. xx

Aww, thats beautiful!! Love is so rare to come around,. Keep the guy u love close to you, love him forever.

5/5 from me

THAT iS CUTE.. i liKE iT. AlOT.. iM HAPPY TO HEAR U TWO ARE HAPPY : ]

Aww...that was purely adorable to read! Made me smile. Your flow was great and the vocabulary that you chose was excellent.

And that we were two halves
Of the very same coin

^ My favorite lines, by far. They we're very original and I had never seen that written in another poem anywhere.

Overall, I think that it was perfect. You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

I give it a 5/5! It was great! I loved the last 2 lines , where you said that he loved you too!That was adorable!

Great poem!

Thats sweet, thats the way i feel! Keep it up!! :)

Great poem! It sounds like a dream. Hold on to that love for as long as you can. Most people never find love like that. Good luck!

~K3!$3Y~

Sweet...im so happy 4 u....

I like the way u write its beautiful

Love the repitition of I knew and the detial is awesome, this is a very awesome piece..keep up the work.

lissa

Ahh i had to read this one again this is above all my fav of yours..its just got everything...

"And the best thing is
I knew you loved me back"

I know how you feel in this couplet! Perfect way to express love on both sides! Great job! (As always)
xoxo