Take a picture

by PatheticLittleGirlxx   Dec 6, 2006


Take her picture
make it last
watch her smile
and then laugh

make a timeline
of her life

day after day
night after night

but slowly watch
as her smile fall
tears pour out
and her laugh is no more

watch her corode and become no more
watch her eyes slowly dull
her heart fall

she is not ther person she was once before

now she is heartbroken

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lovely

    I loved the start with the first 4 stanzas, but the 5th one seemed to be a little off because it didnt flow like the others and if you dont mind i'd like to make a correction, nothing big, just to change the ther to the in the line after the fifth stanza. Its just my opinion but overall, it a Job Well Done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mohamed

    Good one, but the end is not so strong like its start, well done :)