Comments : Arms Of Yesterday

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. this is amazing. your writing is so clear and it flows very well. and i love the words you use, they are very mature compared to some poetry that I read. 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mistake

    Orignal and so clear. I do like this alot. Good work;; 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Ooh. The first stanza is my favorite! =] I loved this poem!! Beautiful write...5/5

    take care,

    -Poetess

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Beautifully written. very touching piece. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "I guess words simply lost their way
    As our eyes tried to confess it all"

    I loved the idea of words losing their way. And the fact that eyes are the windows to the soul fits in perfectly with the second line after it.

    Your poems never disappoint me. Thankyou for writing more =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    !!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
    Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
    Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

    If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
    I return the favor if you comment back

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Loved your title and 'catch' line. Well done!
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Simply gr8! i read ur poem after a long time but really yaar! they r as refreshing as a pure book. always appreciate ur work!5/5

    luv

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Wow.. so beautifully written... i loved how you said 'caught in the arms of yesterday'.... those were some powerful words...
    keep writing..

    much love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was so beautiful and sad at the same time. I relate about living for yesterday! What a talent you are blessed with!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    God, another beautifully written piece!!!
    the last stanza was definitely the best of the best ;)
    this poem was so enjoyable to read

    keep it up
    I have nOthing more to say =)
    amazing
    Cya xxxx