You Love Me; I Can't Imagine Why

by aDORKable x3   Dec 6, 2006


I will never try to control you. That just wouldn't be fair.
I will never try to stop you, just know that I'll always be there.

No matter what you may do, or what you're thinking of,
There's always two things you can count on: that's me and my love.

I still can't believe that you did this to me and I can't imagine why,
Why and How could you love a girl like me? I think I want to cry.

Our song plays around on repeat inside my head,
As I lay here writing this, half alseep on my bed.

The words were hard at first, but then they just came pouring out.
This may be all so confusing, but baby, you know what it's about.

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Written: 12/2/06

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  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This was VERY good. I think it's not confusing at all when you've experienced something like this. It was really good!
    And thanks too for supporting my contest. Your poem really was great, and I just wanted to thank you for entering it. Keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    A very sweet poem Hun.. Very nicely written well done 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Virna Estella

    Nice poem ciao! :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bryan

    Great poem ciao, fix the second to last sentence, (put) should be (but), this has great flow, i give it a 5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Deffinatly confusing.. but at the same time not. the flow was good and it was a great poem.

    your a great writter ciao. i love your work

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