Deffinatly confusing.. but at the same time not. the flow was good and it was a great poem.

your a great writter ciao. i love your work

Great poem ciao, fix the second to last sentence, (put) should be (but), this has great flow, i give it a 5!!! keep it up!!!

Nice poem ciao! :-)

A very sweet poem Hun.. Very nicely written well done 5/5 xx

This was VERY good. I think it's not confusing at all when you've experienced something like this. It was really good!
And thanks too for supporting my contest. Your poem really was great, and I just wanted to thank you for entering it. Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun