Great poem! This was just wonderful!!!
I loved these lines...

To give into these feelings may bring to me a smile
but I know that they will only, sustain me for awhile

How true that is!
Charisma*

I accidentally hit complain on somebody's name who put a comment on mine, and I wasn't trying to but it might have been you, I am so sorry if it was. I was trying to click something else and it hit that. They won't suspend my account will they? I hope not...
Sorry again if it was you.
Charisma*

This poem i can easily relate to.
Once again, as i read the words, i found it almost like a song, the rhythm was done so well.
However the only thing i stumbled on was the last two lines. The very last line put the rhythm off a tiny bit but it's nothing very serious. Just a glitch. It's most probably the speed and tone in which i was reading. But just thought i'd point it out anyway.
Back to poem, brilliant imagery in this one. The words you chose were excellent and make this piece stand out from others on the same subject.
5/5
*Gem*