One day i fell

by Diana   Dec 6, 2006


One day i fell in love
and i couldn't get out
i kicked my legs and struggled
i even let out a shout

but no matter how i tried
i just fell in some more
it was like i was a puddle
i was sinking to the floor

once i got my foot out
but then it sucked back in
i tried to do a back flip
but i twirled and hit my chin

and now I'm hanging upside down
i really don't know what to do
I fell in love and cant get out
what would you do if that happened to you?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jaime

    I love how you used the literal form, it made this poem humourous. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Katlyn

    Hahahaa You made falling in love a literal sence... CUTE ^.^ 5/5

    sincerely,
    Katlyn