I absolutely love this. The imagery was wonderful. This has happened to me on many a Christmas Eve with various toys, Trampoline, bikes etc. The flow was great in this poem. Fantastic Job.
Dixie

Haha... that is so great! you have a real talent for funny poems - this one is just good situational comedy. truth=humor. good rhythm/rhyme, and a fun read!

-p.s. thanks so much for your comment on my poem!

Superb poem!
You managed to get across the frustration a parent would have trying into vain to get a present ready in time for the big day yet you portrayed in such a humorous way!
It definitely made me smile.
The only thing i can suggest is taking a word or two out of the very first line as it isn't really in context with the rest of the flow, i noticed the same thing on the last line of the third stanza. There just seems to be two many words in those lines which causes the flow to be a bit stilted.
But you definitely have a diamond of a poem here, don't let my nit-picking dissuade you of that.
Brilliant poem hun.
Keep writing!!
5/5
*Gem*

Love it! Love it! How many times have we all found ourseves in a situation like this! thanks for the chuckle! Great write!