The real you.

by Anonymous Angel   Dec 6, 2006


I called your name,
but no reaction,
you're not here,
I wonder where I might find you.

At a secret place,
or maybe in an ally,
A street lost in town,
or staring at the ocean.

Thinking how this could happen,
your feelings slipped away,
and your mask fell,
Now I have seen the real you.

Now I've seen,
and like it better,
that the fake you,
don't hide from me,
you know you can trust me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    The emotion here was expressed really well. Nice flow and rhymes as well. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    Deep feelings
    ture friendship is never skin deep
    5/5
    great job

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem, thanks for the comment on "Sinful obsession(collab) did u follow link to april's profile to tell her how u liked it? She would love for u to. This poem is half her work also.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Great poem steph, flowed great, just one thing, remember to capitalize the beggining of stanzas and the title should be capitalized, but i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by the simple girl

    I thought it was a good poem, it had a lot of meaning it it and it was well written.

    ---Ashley

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