Comments : The real you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber

    I like this poem a lot. I don't know how to say this but the writing seems mature. I don't know if that makes since but anyways I think your a good poet and I want to read more!

  • 17 years ago

    by the simple girl

    I thought it was a good poem, it had a lot of meaning it it and it was well written.

    ---Ashley

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Great poem steph, flowed great, just one thing, remember to capitalize the beggining of stanzas and the title should be capitalized, but i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem, thanks for the comment on "Sinful obsession(collab) did u follow link to april's profile to tell her how u liked it? She would love for u to. This poem is half her work also.

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    Deep feelings
    ture friendship is never skin deep
    5/5
    great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    The emotion here was expressed really well. Nice flow and rhymes as well. 5/5

    marcella