by Amber
I like this poem a lot. I don't know how to say this but the writing seems mature. I don't know if that makes since but anyways I think your a good poet and I want to read more! |
I thought it was a good poem, it had a lot of meaning it it and it was well written. |
by Bryan
Great poem steph, flowed great, just one thing, remember to capitalize the beggining of stanzas and the title should be capitalized, but i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |
Great poem, thanks for the comment on "Sinful obsession(collab) did u follow link to april's profile to tell her how u liked it? She would love for u to. This poem is half her work also. |
by Spirit
Deep feelings |
by Cella Bella
The emotion here was expressed really well. Nice flow and rhymes as well. 5/5 |