I don't know what I did!

by Esther   Dec 6, 2006


I thought you liked me,
You made it plain to see,
You were kind and we flirted,
You sometimes took the mick, but i didn't mind

I knew you never meant what you said,
I think you'll regret today when I'm dead,
Today you took it too far,

You hurt my feelings and now I wish I was dead,
Just because of what you said,
I wish I could turn back time,
Make everything fine,

I wish I knew what i'd done,
For our game to stop being fun,
You hurt me today,
When for the first time ever you swore at me,

I am sorry!

Let me make it right,
I never ever want to fight,
Please don't be mad at me,
I like you too much can't you see?

I knew you never knew what you said,
I think you'll regret today when I'm dead!
I wish I could make it right,
I wish I hadn't done anything wrong!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Well written...
    flow was good...you very well described your feelings...a guess a lot of people will be able to relate with it..

    overall a good read..

  • 17 years ago

    by FallenGrace

    Great poem, flows really well, really good read, you really got across your emotions well, well done, keep it up =]
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great poem...and it flowed well too...over all a nice read..but it might be tad better if u adjusted the lines lengths and the rhymes..i giv it a 5/5..for the perfect flow and good presentation
    Kp it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was ok but you never really told the reader what happened you beat the bush enough but never got to the core point that was the only thing that I didn't like good try though Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Oh my god!....such a beautiful write!....i can sooo relate!
    Great!..loved it!

    xxPoojaxx

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