I couldn't have said it better myself 5.5

So much coming from one so young. I like these lines:

fooled by seven letters
if not "love you" then "forever"
I'd believe in forever better
if it actually meant never

I like your style. 5/5

Good job. I liked the thought behind this poem
how a word thats so profound
can fail us so many times
although it never makes a sound
you'll hear the pain it chimes
that was a great stanza!
Nice job!
Charisma*

This is a wikid poem ..... love it love it love it!!!! keep up the awesome work! when i read it it's like reading my life!! please check out some more of my poems
x x x skye x x x

Once again u have out done uself Mr Wild, for once i believe u have a reason to be vain.. lol
this poem has helped me understand u better. 5/5 for this brilliant poem..

Wow i love this one so true

Wow...

This Poem was Very Meaningful..

I agree with this poem very much..

But when Love is in the air its the Best feeling.. Even If it doesnt last forever..

Well done, karl. I loved reading this one, it was very true, and i love your style.
xxxxx

"I'd believe in forever better
if it actually meant never"
Amen over and over again. This was such a great piece of work... I can relate to almost everythhing you write, and you do it so well, greatly done!

TuxxxB

Wow, this was simply amazing! =] Perfection and originality written all over it! The flow was good and your choice of wording was excellent!

"I'd believe in forever better
if it actually meant never"

^ My favorite lines, by far because they hold a lot of meaning behind them. =]

Great job writing this one. 5/5 Keep it up. You've got a lot of talent as a writer and I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future! =] Thx for the comments too, they mean a lot to me as a writer!

Stephanie

Wow!
I loved everything about this.
it was perfect.
A beautiful write.

The choice of rhyme was excellent, it flowed and came together perfect, great poem karl, 5/5!!!

Hi, i like your work, youre really good!

Nice.. you're now one of my favorite writers..

Wow this was really good. U have a great writing style. 5/5

I didnt really understand it because im young but you knoe it sounded good so 4/5

This is a really great poem, you express yourself well, however.. i disagree.. love can last forever.. be optomistic :)

Your poems are awesome, they speak the truth. another great 5/5.

I really gave this a lot of thought while I was in never never land but a can face the reality you have expressed so well in this poem now.. BTW I like your style

Although in parts of this I had to read it twice, it was almost like a tongue twister with the "forever never's" it was great. I agree with your words, forever has little worth these days. Good flow, meaning and concept. 5/5

Tammie