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by myshiningstar14 Dec 6, 2006 category : Friendship, family / love, friendship
I burn inside, the moon withers as the memories tear. Still my heart beats because of your love. I don't love you just because you loved me, I love you because I trust you. I dab at my pain, watching them turn into smiles. Your heart shines through and I unconsciously become caught up in you. I melt inside the blood brews as our hearts pump, trying to make it through. Inside your voice pulls me back like a wake up call. Inside I know I have it all. Inside your energy electrifies me. Inside me and you is all I see.
by Gem
"I dab at my pain, watching them turn into smiles." A lovely way of looking at it. Your structure is amazing, it really helps the flow of the poem along brilliantly. Fab =) 5/5 *Gem*
by Alicesjourney
Nice poem!