Nice diss whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Loved it hun, great flow. If some one did this to you, tell me who it is coz I'm female I'll hurt them for you :) thanks for the comments. Keep writing =]

Pip xxx

Tisk tisk, one of ur best poems, shame the poor girl, this is the ultimate diss..

Wow dis is GREAT! Mayn y she have 2 go ahead n do dat i know wat chu feel but instaed of a gurl a guy did it 2 me i felt da same way. Great work keep it up

Another excellent poem u wrote here, i know how u feel cause i also felt this way,still 5/5

Harsh but good i guess. keep it up

Hah nicee

A little harsh but I have felt all that before, mainly those lines like "If you weren't a female I would tear your face apart". This really was the ultimate diss... A little angry but we all get mad, this was a great write.*Favorited!

TuxB

Umm... i'm gonna go with interesting... lol. it was a good write, i'll talk about the literary elements... lots of feeling and emotions, obviously. great job 5/5

I could really relate to the anger that you portrayed in this. The flow and rhythm was very good and held up well. I really really liked the last two lines. It just kind of made me smile and feel like you two were even. lol. But I really liked this. It sounds like you got your anger out very well. 5/5

The last line made me laugh

It stole some of my text.
I could sense the anger in this, I wasn't expecting the final twist in the last stanza.
As usual, 5/5

Ha ha ha! great poem! i love the last stanza, so funny!
Try to start each new line with a capital letter.
Steph

In the title and the last line, it should be 'too', not 'to'. "Too" meaning also.
I think you should work on a better title, or cut it down a little bit.

I've been in that situation many times my friend, I know exactly what you are going through. A very nice way to get out your anger. A little bit out of control, but it was still a decent poem.

Neat!

Daaaaaaaaamn boi! I likee dis! Omg its great! I can totaly relate to that! Keep up the god work!

DAMN WHO EVER SHE IS GOT IT BAD IN THAT POEM I LOVED IT THOUGH

Sounds like somthing I'd write to my ex wife. lol anyways very strong powerful write.

Ouch!
I kinda know how you feel....Some women just don't get it....
Nice write :)

5/5

-Dan

WOAH.
How can someone do this?
Thats mean.
Really good poem though.

xoCourtneyLynnxo