You see man im a girl but some girls are STUPID they dont listen they think they have control but really they dont...i know imma girl but imma tomboy so it dont matter to me that im talking like this anyways you go boy i mean i hope she felt bad i know she did well 5/5

Lol this is great! 5/5

Haha I hope no one's ever written anything like that about me.. I hope I've never made anyone that mad! Deffinately overflowing with emotion, I have to say. Good good

Wow, ok, i like it! actually... i love it! nice

Narc xxx

This poem is awsome....srry the chick did you wrong....i love it!!!!!

Wow. this is great. totally a 5/5.

If you pulled those last lines off, then props!

Wow, I loving how your words flow together and it sounds so real.

Hahaha this fukin ruled x x x

Interesting

OOOOHHHHHHHH... haha that is awesomeee.. I could definitely feel the anger throughout the poem but the ending just did it for me.. You couldn't have finished it any better... haha.. that is amazing.. you are a genius haha.. what a diss.. i feel sorry for her.. haha 10/10 =]

I didnt like it, it wasnt for me.
but it flowed well, and there was nothing wrong with any of it, except i didnt feel much for it

love Tara-Kay

I could definitely feel the emotion in this one. There is so much anger in it. I liked it. It had a nice flow and wonderfully strong word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

Haha..idk if this was supposed to make me laugh...but it did. i love the ending! i love ur rhymin with the ABAB it has good flow!!

xo kisses xo

Haha not gonna lie, that cracked me up. i loved then ending.
but as for the poem itself, the flow and rhyme were really good. and the change of emotion was powerful.
it was also neat how you used humor and anger.
good job.

First off I'll start with one tiny little commen mistake everyone makes. In the title it should be "too" instead of "to" Just to let you know. Ok back to the poem wow with the anger which you put into this. It seemed so real to me like you wrote this straight from your mind body and soul. The last line definitly interesting and intriguing I liked it alot.

My anger level constantly increases,
Because of your f u c k ing lack of respect.

Above are my favorite lines because they really hit me hard when I read it. I honestly understood this poem alot and think you did an amazing job. A great effort I have enjoyed reading all your poems. Really talented. ~mel

I would never want to be in that girls shoes lol wow alot of emotion was expressed and your true feelings came out obviously =] great write!

laura

Omfg
i love explicit poems and this one really takes the cake...
haha
i LOVE the ending

Stole your heart ya I'm the bomb",
But you'll soon realize who was really in control,
Because I f**ked your sister and your Mom.

haha perfect...

brilliant poem loved it
5/5

Sorry could not vote
to young to read

Omg ah I have instantly now truly fallen in love with your work, i've read three but this is the first I would comment because it sent me into a fit of giggles. Very very nice poem, I could feel the anger surging out of the words. I could picture you smiling at the dis.

Ahh that made my day, time to add you as one of my favorite poets :)

5/5

Quillx