by Cassie Cain
Good poem |
by Michelle18
Oh my freaking goodness....wow ... uhm .. just wow... this is ...AWESOME lol... i wouldnt want to get on your bad side..lol... |
by Lorryn
Definately a fav***. |
This is great! Reminds me of my ex-wife, lol. It has such powerful pain and rage yet crucial elements of humor. Great use of modern jargon (hard to pull off in a poem and have it work well, and it does here). I'm sure many a wronged lover (especially wronged by the cruel and heartless ones of this world) can relate to this. |