Jeffrey, that was a very good rap. Lol. It actually made me laugh for some reason. This is the past correct? Hope so. Well.. it was very well written. Nice job, finally. =) 4.8/5

Amamzing rap...that was amazing , great orignality and sting. love ur stuff keep it up.

lissa

Jeff, that was brilliant.

Great work, just like everything else you write. I admire you and your raps. =]]

Jeff, that was brilliant.

Great work, just like everything else you write. I admire you and your raps. =]]