Your poem is amazing.. i love it

Great poem. It does not suck. Maybe it's just me who's used to rhymless poems...
So, keep up the good work nega-nellie
5/5
~Stevie

Very good =D It doesn't matter that Sir ripped up your first one =] This is good, I told you second ones are always better =P

I didn't get to comment last time :/ Sorry.
But anyways I read the first one and I think this one is better.
Theys both still great though.
Keep up all the hard work.

I still like it

good poem and god i hate it when teachers rip stuff up.
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