Put Your heart In to it

by Brittany C   Dec 6, 2006


Put your heart in to
what ever you do.
You have a dream.
I have a dream,
that I will someday play pro soccer.
That is what I will do.
I truly hope so.
It is part of me,
and that is the truth.
I play my heart out.
I have been working hard
for this goal of mine.
With out this sport,
what would I do?
Soccer season is the only time
I feel need because I am a part
of a team. Do you feel needed?
What are you going to do
with your life?
What ever you love
just put your heart in to it,
and you could go all the way.
If you put your heart in to it.

This poem is important to me so please tell me what you truly think about it.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Your title:
    It's supposed to be "Put Your Heart Into It."
    That's why I couldn't find it. :P

    Put your heart [[into]]

    [[You have a dream.
    I have a dream,]]
    You said "you" in the first four lines.
    Change it.
    It just seems... awkward.
    Maybe you can change it into

    Dream
    For I have a dream

    Honestly?
    When I read that it was about soccer...
    I was a bit shocked.
    In all my days of grading, I have never read anyone write about their favorite sport.

    I'm glad that this is important to you, m'dear.
    For I, too, have a sport that I'm in love with.
    Hopefully I go to tournaments, I don't need to one.
    I'd be just glad to know that I'm able to go.

    This wonderful, wonderful poem.
    Deserves a wonderful five :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This was another great poem, that you have written. I love all your poems 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this is another wonderful poem by you, you are so great.
    keep up the great job as i am sure there are many ppl here who love to read your poetry.nothing less than a 5/5 as you really deserve it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Naima

    This is a great inspirational poem! I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    I can tell you really love the sport, and i think you will make it if you put your heart into it, 5/5 on the poem!!!

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