Wow!! nice poem ... gud writtin.. full of emotions and actions .. omg i just love it.
well at last all dat i wanna say is dat dont lose the hope in finding her because u will. just stay strong and follow ur heart.
The sun shown down with rain in absence,
But in the presence of light the youth struggles.
Rapids crash over bodies of the lost.
The water erodes the lies,
^^ I really really like this
Ash, this poem is great, andyour A/n made my heart burst for you. I wish you the best of luck in your sreach =]