Awwww poems like this one always bring out the the best emotions :)) love it :))

A truly sweet poem about your children. So wonderful how you feel. I noticed one thing where you can change it
They come first in my life they are reason I live for

I think it should read
They come first in my life and are what I live for.

It flows a little better, but is just a suggestion.
Charisma*

Well im not even old enough to even dream of having children but this poem was really sweet and i am sure your kids look at you as just as much a hero as you do them. and i am sorry about the father but you have them and they can make life a lot brighter. i love kids. but an excellent poem 5/5

Well i think that is the way it should be! What a sweet poem about your children! Lovely 5/5

Kelly
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Children are amazing and the biggest miracles and sometimes pain lol

That was amazing. You are so lucky to have your children that love you! God really blessed you. Thank you for commenting!
Burning~Wings

Awe. This is very sweet. I am glad your children have given you the strength to carry on. It is so hard to deal with a broken heart. I bet this poem will one day touch their hearts. Good luck with all you do.