Opportunity

by X2892   Dec 7, 2006


Nobody can feel the hurt
that I have inside my heart.
Feels like every part of my body is being slice non-stop.
Just being hurt everyday.

The real hurt comes from
not being with you anymore;
it just kills me inside.
Just wanting to be with you.

Tell me what you really
feel for me.
Only because I want to
see that me and you
are truly meant to be
with each other.
Also because I want
to see if you feel
what I feel.

I just want a second
opportunity with you.
But you are the only
one who can give it to me.

The real hurt comes from
not being with you anymore;
it just kills me inside.
Just wanting to be with you.

Just being here writing
this poem for you my love;
but the only thing now is that,
I'm afraid to ask you
out again because I'm afraid
that you might reject me.
Then I tell myself
that I have to stop being
afraid because my love for
you is worth fighting for!

MADE FOR u PinKY u know who u r

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  • 18 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    Awesome poem hun..it's about time you poested another poem on here!! I really liked this one!

    xox
    Ally

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    A couple grammar mistakes, but otherwise, it`s pretty good . Not great, but it`s good =) The flow is also good, but not fantastic . Could be better . People can relate to this, so it brings more appeal to the poem too .
    Good job .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • Pretty good poem. the flow could be worked on a little. but i liked the feel of never being able to reach happiness(or something) this poem had.

    good work.
    βlαξκ ♥ hεαrτ

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    A lovely read. It was kinda sad but still i really enjoyed it. It had a good flow, and good vocab used throuhgtout it. A lovely read, Keep up the great work!! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I liked it, though I found it a bit depressing for a love poem. Well, not all love poems are happy. It was lovely. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson