by X2892 Dec 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Nobody can feel the hurt |
Awesome poem hun..it's about time you poested another poem on here!! I really liked this one! |
A couple grammar mistakes, but otherwise, it`s pretty good . Not great, but it`s good =) The flow is also good, but not fantastic . Could be better . People can relate to this, so it brings more appeal to the poem too . |
Pretty good poem. the flow could be worked on a little. but i liked the feel of never being able to reach happiness(or something) this poem had. |
A lovely read. It was kinda sad but still i really enjoyed it. It had a good flow, and good vocab used throuhgtout it. A lovely read, Keep up the great work!! xx |
by Allison
I liked it, though I found it a bit depressing for a love poem. Well, not all love poems are happy. It was lovely. Keep up the good work. *5/5* |