Tell me what you really
feel for me.
Only because I want to
see that me and you
are truly meant to be
with each other.

that was great! especially that line - it was very clever i thought. one thing though - there were those two stanzas that were longer than the others, it just kinda jolted me for a second before i could go on. at the beginning when you say "Feels like every part of my body is being slice non-stop." , did you mean 'sliced'? it just makes a bit more sense lol. but other than that, i thought you did a pretty good job. 5/5!

EMMMm

When I read this poem, I see a young teenager coming to terms with the fact that he's no longer with this girl who he really wants back, yet is trying to be a man about it. I know that may sound wierd and confusing lol but good poem. Keep on writing, and thanks for the comment =)

God Bless

I know exactly where your comming from because i went through the same thing, but somethings just aren't meant to be, maybe somebody else is better for you nice job 5/5

I like it a lot I know how it is and how you feel. I like it though real good job. 5/5 I rate it

Laura

Very good poem. I really like it. I know a lot of people who feel that way. Keep up the good work. Never stop writing. Please dont change this poem it is good the way it is. 5/5

I liked it, though I found it a bit depressing for a love poem. Well, not all love poems are happy. It was lovely. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

A lovely read. It was kinda sad but still i really enjoyed it. It had a good flow, and good vocab used throuhgtout it. A lovely read, Keep up the great work!! xx

Pretty good poem. the flow could be worked on a little. but i liked the feel of never being able to reach happiness(or something) this poem had.

good work.
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A couple grammar mistakes, but otherwise, it`s pretty good . Not great, but it`s good =) The flow is also good, but not fantastic . Could be better . People can relate to this, so it brings more appeal to the poem too .
Good job .
..__MiNDYY

Awesome poem hun..it's about time you poested another poem on here!! I really liked this one!

xox
Ally