Comments : Human Like You

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Once again i loved the ending to this poem.
    You always seem to end on a moral of the poem, i think i could have phrased that better, lmao

    "Knowing in the end, the words were all just lies"

    I'd take out 'just' in that line to keep it flowing but it sounds just fine with it in as well.
    So overall, fab poem (as always, ;)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I love what you have said in this.. It's really well written, and you have chosen just the right words to say what you want to. Well done. xx