Wow this poem is kinda sad but it gets the point across and the words are powerful excellent job 5/5

I like this alot im all into the sad poems right now it flows perfect keep it up and its wonderfully expressed with a point

I like the rhyming scheme. it's really nice. the first line is definitely my favorite. the part about the towers. congrats on a great poem! 5/5

This could have so easily been submitted under Dark Poetry. It was very well done. Loved the imagery you projected from the first line to the last.

The flow was a bit off in places, but not enough to take from the poem as a whole.

You did a very good job on this. Keep it up.

Happiness
Jeannie

Just one sentence: BREATH TAKING!!!

5/5

Wow really sad poem. The imagery and usage of vocabulary was excellent! Had a good flow. And the title was really eye catching. Keep it up! xx

Very,Very descriptive and sad.Well penned Weep a puddle or two At least
Again death pours
Given 5/5

Wow that really was good... very dark and deep, but i like it! it's a different type of dark and dismal, it's different than most sadness. wonderful job, good flow, 5/5

Flowers come in black, not red or gold
You come to me in grey
^^^
I love these lines, verry symbolic!
your rhyming is awsome, you have a great vocab, finaly a poem on here thats rhyming isn't totaly cliche! lol
definatly a 5/5 from me

~Steph.