This is really good.....im sorry u feel so sad about how everythings goin in ur life but i hope they get better....just try ur best and b strong

Comment #5:
So amazing....you're actually going on my favorites and I didn't even do that for the winner! lol...you just have so much talent, and I can't wait to read another poem. Beautiful job! And thanks again for all the support in my contest. Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

Another great one.. good word choice and again with the flawless flow and rhyme.. great job