Beautiful imagery, incredible prose. Love it!
Write more:)
5/5
~Stevie

Very good poem. It has a great flow to it and great word choice. I loved it. Another 5/5 :)

Short but oh so good! you did great on this one, the rhyming was perfect and the imagery was amazing. i loved it all...what can i say? great poem!
EMmmm

Thats WONDERFUL way to get people excited about going to highschool.
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Dark and eery ,gives you a spooky feeling. great job.

Thats a cool poem. nice imagery.

Although dark poems aren't my favorite, I do like this one a lot. Good imagery and flow. 5/5