Comments : You knew from the start

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Such a bittersweet poem.
    "You knew from the start,
    That someone already held my heart.
    I don't know what else to say,
    But because of him you can not stay."
    It's nobody's fault when this happens yet it hurts both sides
    Well written
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Geoff Clemence

    Your writting is exellent. True emotions pumping out. Love em!