Augustana...nah never heard of them but i do wonder how come they copied my theme in advance... :o)

Well, this is just so unique, i hv never read anything like this....and i liked it all the way..good selection of words

all the best and take care

This was really good. The imagery created from the repetition of 'dirty dish water' was really effective. And the emotion was flowing throughout this poem. Excellent work.

Wo, thats one long poem woman! I like it alot though, you have definatly improved over time though.
Steph

WOW! i loved it! its so emotional and powerful. you were 15? absolutely amazing...
-sda-

For a fifteen year old, this poem is absolutely fantastic!
You really put your emotions to fabulous use! This site needs someone with your talent
Excellent work!
5/5
*Gem*

This was so sad...yet so beautiful to read.
I loved the imagery you used, and I thought this was fantastic!

15 wow. really good emotion and i love the way you used the repitition. keep it up :)

Whoa. this is long but so great! i love it. thank you so much for all the comments. i will comment on yours too. to try and make up for so many from you.

i loved this poem. long but you kept the intensity thruout the whole poem. 5/5

David